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Ivy ([personal profile] ivybgreenflower) wrote2004-06-25 11:02 pm

Tea Party Curse... first attempt

This is a FIRST attempt at writing The Tea Party Curse. I'm setting new ground here by 1. Writing my own death. I'm crap at killing myself. And 2. By writing about real people, almost-real events and a real place (Jolene's house.)

So I may rewrite it at a later date. Whatever.



I'm Lydia (I decided I like it better than Lila), Bianca is Maureen, Jolene is Marie, and Danielle is Marion. Because y'all are difficult.

CHANGES MADE TO JOLENE'S HOUSE:
The tea room is bigger. The kitchen is less modern. The living room has a chandelier. The piano is less modern too. Jolene has two maids, a gardener, a butler, and a pizza guy who gets stuck in the house with us girls. Hey, I needed someone for comic relief. Oh, and she lives near a motel. I know. I'm unoriginal.

So let's get this party started! (Bad joke, bad joke!)

Lydia, after much careful consideration, decided it was best to accept the tea party invitation, even though she hated tea. Passionately.

I can't write this. screw it.


Ivyette @ 11:30 PM

[identity profile] aloneallalong.livejournal.com 2004-06-26 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
The first sentence is good, I'm sure if you give yourself some time to think and everything than the rest of it will come smoothly, I know how you feel, because I'm not that great at writing anything, I start fanfictions, and never finish them. I'm really terrible.

[identity profile] aloneallalong.livejournal.com 2004-06-26 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, thanks, Ginny rewlz! ;D

No HTML allowed in subject ... but why? It's just not fair *hymph*

[identity profile] takauji.livejournal.com 2004-06-26 10:42 am (UTC)(link)
If you strain your brain to much and try forcing a good story out in one minute nothing's really gonna come out buuuuuuuut im sure you know that... its just something stupid i do all the time lol. oh which by the way ive got an outline to my Kill Everyone story. Got the idea from a dream i had last night, maybe i'll tell ya of it later

Love, luck, and lollipops
- i'm the man, 5th to the right

[identity profile] ofstaticpallor.livejournal.com 2004-06-26 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Who is Danielle?

[identity profile] ofstaticpallor.livejournal.com 2004-06-27 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
oh fun stuff.
I love Psycho.

WTF

[identity profile] living-in-ennui.livejournal.com 2004-06-29 01:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I hadn't been able to read this yet so I finally tried today. I'm all set (woohoo) you know, let's get this part started, and THERE'S ALL THE COMMENTS ALREADY. But, whatever. I expect that you have made another attempt. *is off to find it*