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ivybgreenflower) wrote2004-04-13 01:16 am
ivybgreenflower) wrote2004-04-13 01:16 am
Happy belated Easter!
I update three times in one day and neglect to mention that it's Easter? Geeeeez.
Oh well.
Owing to the amount of feedback on my Samara story, I will now promise to update it daily until the end of break, after which it will be updated on Friday and Saturday nights, weather permitting, and my brain permitting :P
I had hoped the style wouldn't be too confusing, seeing as how her thoughts and the narration blend together. I hope it's seamless. I got the idea from "The Life You Save May Be Your Own" where the description is done in purposeful dialect without using quotes... I hope you like it. I guess Samara is a little like me, I would *sooooo* throw my shoes around and squeeze soda bottles. I also like pizza. I'm trying not to use too many adverbs and adjectives; I tend to be over-descriptive. But it seems I did the opposite and now you don't know what they look like! Oh well, I'll remedy this later. I can't write now- I'm on my laptop, which is notorious for deleting long entries.
I have an important story to tell you about how much John and George love me (they proved it! I BELIEVE! I BELIEVE!) but for now I'm dead tired so bye.
See you on the morrow, then!
Ivyette @ 1:23 AM
Oh well.
Owing to the amount of feedback on my Samara story, I will now promise to update it daily until the end of break, after which it will be updated on Friday and Saturday nights, weather permitting, and my brain permitting :P
I had hoped the style wouldn't be too confusing, seeing as how her thoughts and the narration blend together. I hope it's seamless. I got the idea from "The Life You Save May Be Your Own" where the description is done in purposeful dialect without using quotes... I hope you like it. I guess Samara is a little like me, I would *sooooo* throw my shoes around and squeeze soda bottles. I also like pizza. I'm trying not to use too many adverbs and adjectives; I tend to be over-descriptive. But it seems I did the opposite and now you don't know what they look like! Oh well, I'll remedy this later. I can't write now- I'm on my laptop, which is notorious for deleting long entries.
I have an important story to tell you about how much John and George love me (they proved it! I BELIEVE! I BELIEVE!) but for now I'm dead tired so bye.
See you on the morrow, then!
Ivyette @ 1:23 AM