Ivy (
ivybgreenflower) wrote2005-06-03 02:33 am
Ooh shiny

The text is supposed to read like this:
and you don't know what I'm FEELING
'cause you're heart's just not this BLACK
it's kind of hard to DESCRIBE it
it's from taking a lot of your CRAP
I guess I should probably TRY
like a feeling of perpetual SADNESS
like I'm always going to CRY
it would help if you'd try to fix it, my DEAR
I just can't take the CRAZINESS
it would be nice if there was somebody HERE.
It reads much prettier if you don't read it anticipating the rhymes/read it all bunched up, just read it line by line and DON'T see the big picture. Concentrate on the lines themselves.
